http://margaretnoble.net/blog/fanphony/There is a Buzzing sensation everywhere, in the tone of a high pitched monotone vibration like when someone is calling you in vibrate mode, the sound is a swarm of bees flying bye like the air from a fan but at the same time i make a long low pitched voice that prejects into the fan which comes together to make this unique and interesting noise. The Buzzing continues and it is now an amusement park of a collaboration of sounds, but the staff at the amusement park forgot they needed one more employee so another noise adds in slowly like newborn baby's drink their bottles. the sound accelerates up, and accelerates slowly down along with the symphony of other noise but it stands out from the rest of the band of sound. The monotone begins again while the up and down accelerating solo fades away, but this time the vibrating monotone does not change it keeps going. It rambles on and rambles on just like your mother when you have to hear a lecture all the way home from school for not doing your homework on time or doing bad on a quiz. At this point the noise becomes boring until suddenly a machine gun noise comes in and it completely changes the flow of the noise like a verse in a rap song and it could almost describe a train going along its track; chuggachukkachuggachukkachuggachukka, exactly like this. This new kid on the block or in other words new solo to the monotone is louder than a chopper slowly lifting off the ground as it leaves into the sky, and similar to past solos in the band of buzz and vibration, it accelerates up and accelerates down for a long period of time. this sound is so fun to listen to especially when when it changes right about now!!! Zip ZUp Zip ZUP ZZUUUZZZUUUZUUU.....i know realize it is the nature made guitar whammy bar that continues all through out the rest of the clip and STOP....everything comes to dead silence!...guess what? the clip is over and then i decided to get up and eat dinner.
~The part of the description that i liked was when you talked about the sound being like an amusement park of a collaboration of sounds. The way you described the sounds with such detail was very impressive. I also liked the metaphors you used for your descriptions
ReplyDelete~You described your sound as a high pitched monotone vibration like when someone calls you and your phone's on vibrate. The sound of swarming bees flying by like the air coming from a fan. The way the sound accelerates up and slows down
~What you could have done to make it better would be to spell check you spelled a couple things wrong